Kirsten: I've made two small changes.
Moved the last sentence in paragraph 5 to the second sentence in paragraph
6. I think it makes more sense there.
I've modified the last sentence in paragraph 10 to be what I think is a more
accurate statement. It now reads:
"It could instead prohibit further direct access arrangements as of the
issuance of the order, when and if that occurs, or as of some other
unspecified date in the future. "

Let me know if you're comfortable with these changes and I'll print out the
last page, sign and fax to your SF office.

Best,
Jeff