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I've incorporated my final comments into the attached draft (not red-lined). Below are a couple of additional notes. Footnote 4 does not appear at the bottom of the page where the actual footnote resides; it appears on the following page. This may clear up when all the formatting is completed or it may be something that needs to be fixed. Also, there is a line drawn above the footnote that should not be there. I added language under #2 on page 3. Our rationale in the second paragraph needed a lead-in, which I added to the end of the first paragraph. For footnote 5, I deleted the text, which was from an earlier note of mine. I changed the footnote to reference the new paragraph number instead of a page number in the NOPR. The quote is in paragraph 7 of the NOPR. Please revise the footnote to use the proper verbiage. Thanks, Theresa
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